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Emo Pictures - EmoKidTillTheEnd
EmoKidTillTheEnd
Posts: 14
Pressure Apr 11 2010, 11:34 AM
Ok so this poem is about my parents putting pressure on me to do well and making me practise guitar witch i hate .It really kinda upsets me. . It's not great but here goes: Put pressure on me And make me bleed. I'm stuck like this for eternity. I'll leave it all And watch it burn. So much for trying to live and learn. Tell me what u think...

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4everLostNeverFound
Posts: 2
Apr 11 2010, 02:04 PM
i liked it. i like the last two lines how only they rhymed and the rest was just statements.
Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Apr 20 2010, 06:34 AM
i like it. i like how ts simple and short but still shows a wealth of emotion
Emo Pictures - HardLifeDiary
HardLifeDiary
Posts: 62
Apr 23 2010, 09:20 AM
It's great! Make more of these.
Emo Pictures - EmoKidTillTheEnd
EmoKidTillTheEnd
Posts: 14
Jun 22 2010, 11:59 AM
thanks 4 all the comments :)

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