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porslin_princess
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Lost and Confused May 21 2010, 07:24 AM

Lost and Confused My mind is slipping away Towards that unwanted zone In my brain Slowly I’m creeping My way in Back to those thoughts Of blood and pain, Back to those feelings of loneliness, Even though love is all around me. Back to those lonely walks Headed towards that empty doorway. Those thoughts are my weakness Because they are filled with dark Twisted hatred. I wish I had my light next To me because it always pulled me Away… Away it would pull me But what would happen if my Light started heading towards That darkness That it has of it’s own?

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365

May 23 2010, 11:41 AM

you are really good at writing. keep it up ^_^

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broken_wings21
Posts: 13

Jul 12 2010, 06:38 PM

i really think this poem is good my fav lines were when you said "back to those feelings of loneliness, even though love is all around me" ^_^

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porslin_princess
Posts: 21

Dec 08 2010, 08:30 AM

thankz

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TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101

Dec 08 2010, 10:40 AM

you put evrything too bluntly no offence hun but wheres the style

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xxrainydaysxx
Posts: 43

Dec 11 2010, 11:00 AM

/likes. It's cool how you end it with a question =0

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