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Never caught my breath Every second I'm without you I'm a mess I Caught Fire (In Your Eyes), by The Used

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Breezy
Posts: 336
Just in time May 26 2010, 12:06 PM
Cut my wrists, Black my eyes, All I can do, Is look at they sky, Stab my heart, Blow my mind, Help me find, Someone kind, Take this pain, Take me at night, Please guide me, Through the light, Sing my song, Embrace my life, When the sun sets, I might be gone, Unless in time, You come through, In the fire, And be mine...

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Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
May 27 2010, 01:22 PM
that is really good how long have you been writing?
Breezy
Posts: 336
May 27 2010, 03:24 PM
umm....i think 5 or 6? i know i'v been writing as long as i can remember, every year i got atleast second or first place in young authors with writing stories and poems.
Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
May 29 2010, 11:56 PM
good job are you going to make a career of it?
Breezy
Posts: 336
May 31 2010, 01:32 PM
i'm going to do writing,art,music,photography and i'm gonna be a coroner when i get older.
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
May 31 2010, 03:22 PM
i like your writing Breezy , You got talent :). I like the use of the ellipsis in the last line. Keep up the good work.

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