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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Jeff_MCRnutter
Posts: 332
Mass Murderer Jun 09 2010, 11:31 PM
As I stand here in the wasteland of the dead Thoughts of what I have done run through my head Bloodshed, cries and tears What Ive done is the sum of all fears Imagine This A bullet kiss Delivered to your left eye As the right one tries to cry I will kill your friends before you And there is nothing you can do No dropping to your knees No mercy for your pleas You know i dont just do this for fun I do it because it has to be done This is not a game Its just not the same No continues or lives No one survives No hero shall win No punishment for my sin To make worse these sins of the past These regrets i have will not last There is no prison sentence for me No punishment or loss of dignity This medal was given to me for what Ive done But i throw it to the ground and to it I shun

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xxDaRkTeMpTaTiOnxx
Posts: 2
Jun 10 2010, 05:45 AM
Very dark, I had to read it a few times over, it's very good, kinda gives you chills when you read it, you have alot of talent
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
Jun 10 2010, 01:42 PM
Dark is the word I would have used as well (really!) Keep up the good work :]
Breezy
Posts: 336
Jun 10 2010, 02:01 PM
dude, thats a beautiful poem. reminds me of something i would have wrote last year.
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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Jun 12 2010, 11:05 AM
thats really good it reminds me of war.

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