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Emo Pictures - broken_wings21
broken_wings21
Posts: 13
bleed the pain away Jul 10 2010, 10:58 AM
he smiles like everything's fine, but secretly hides a pain so real, laughing and playing with everyone else, putting on a show till he gets home, nobody knows that he secretly cry's, alone in his room its like a lullaby at night, praying was good for a long while, till he found another escape one that plead through the pain. he goes about the day, with a head held high, lies when everyone asks if hes ok, and for awhile they all believe until the scars begin to show. the kids they all laugh in his presence, making him feel hated, unwanted, and unloved, at home its no better, everything's all wrong, so he locks himself in his room every night his only comfort zone. till one day he just couldn't take it anymore, the pain the hurt the aloness was all overwhelming, he starred into his mirror looking at his reflection, while he took the only thing he could relate with, and watched as he bled the pain away okay so yes i wrote this in a guys point of you but still tell me if u like it or if u don't..

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Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Jul 10 2010, 02:21 PM
it doesnt matter if its a guy or girl pov it still sends the same message. i love it! good job!
Emo Pictures - DiEiNgInSiDe
DiEiNgInSiDe
Posts: 108
Jul 10 2010, 03:33 PM
That's really good! :)
Emo Pictures - EmO_LoVe
EmO_LoVe
Posts: 8
Jul 11 2010, 12:37 AM
really? out of all the fucking stacks of poems you have wrote you chose this one. ok i guess whatever floats your boat. jk lol i loves you tiffy baby
Emo Pictures - broken_wings21
broken_wings21
Posts: 13
Jul 11 2010, 01:30 PM
damn i luvs u too! felic haahaa and yes i chose this one but don't worry i might post another :)
Emo Pictures - broken_wings21
broken_wings21
Posts: 13
Jul 11 2010, 06:45 PM
thanx hun!! ^_^

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