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LastUltimatum
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Lost Story Jul 20 2010, 05:41 AM

The darkness consumes him while everyone watches. Only one pays attention and tries to help. She tries and tries only to fail. He was now to far gone. He gave up on life and its virtues. He went missing a month later. Nobody knew where he was. He sent a lone letter to her. She read it a tears gathered in her eyes. It said "I am sorry for leaving you....I hope you can forgive me. If you want to see me come to Mt. Faith. I'll be there everyday waiting for you." She didn't understand why he was at a graveyard...and she didn't care. All she knew was...he was alive. She looked every where for him. Out of curiosity she started to read the headstones. She came to a paticular headstone...as she read she started too cry. It was his. The words engraved on it were "He lived but never died."

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
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Jul 21 2010, 08:06 PM

i like it good job!~

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LastUltimatum
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Jul 22 2010, 12:39 PM

thank you

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