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cotunderdasky
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Car. Aug 20 2010, 05:20 AM

She decided to take a drive. She decided to text him she loved him. He decided to respond. "who are you?, stop talking to me. I only used you for my needs, you're trash, always will be, I "Don't" love you, you are nothing and no one to me" She stares at his response. The moon lit. The tears fall. The anger and depression sets in. He's kissing the other girl. She grows hopeless at the wheel. She responds. "You're right....i lived for you....now that im the one you no longer live for....why am i still alive....thanks for being truthful....bye...." He recieves her suicide. He says "no, no, don't do that!". But his response was to slow and to late. (wondering why would anyone take someones soul with hurtful words.) and she speeds up driving into the headlights of a 18 wheeler truck. in her "car". He get's no response.

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
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Aug 30 2010, 01:04 AM

thats really good i love it!

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