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never_again_
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just started...whatcha think ..?....<3 Nov 16 2010, 11:36 AM

You always said you jump i jump but here i am eady to fall and your nowhere around i remember when you told me i will always be here butnow im here waiting waiting for you to be here when i need you time passes i have no choice i see this now i walk towards the edge still hoping praying that i will see your face i wait a second close my eyes and jump and as i fall through the air i hear your voice screaming my name and as a single tear drops below i fall in love once again

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Nov 16 2010, 01:42 PM

Beautiful!

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OnyxAngel
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Nov 16 2010, 04:32 PM

A lot of typos, but it's really beautiful :D

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never_again_
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Nov 17 2010, 11:17 AM

thankyouuu :) xx and i know there probly are im not very good with typing and stuf :/ lol x

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