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Emo Pictures - RawrBittenTwice14
RawrBittenTwice14
Posts: 53
Some Genral thing I Just Thought Up :) Dec 01 2010, 08:46 AM
Fists of time pound me, Eyes, so blue confound me, Desires, like you a phantom upon my life, Are no longer, for you are not without sacrifice. Oh slit temptations throat, Cut mine eyes in them wrote, Your sadistic name, again - again Neither life's epic beauty or magic, relieves this pain. Heaven you would think, Would call me from this brink, Again I claim the flickering fires, That come from unearthly, terrible desires. So here it is when I conclude, What frauds fickle men, those that do delude are, for the savour of earth, the white robed speaker, Desires God's sweet praise- Evil abhorrent, desires gentle leaker.

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18362
Dec 02 2010, 02:28 PM
Good work!
xxOneLastGoodnightxx
Posts: 149
Dec 02 2010, 02:38 PM
Great job :)
Emo Pictures - RawrBittenTwice14
RawrBittenTwice14
Posts: 53
Dec 06 2010, 09:45 AM
thanks :)
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Dec 06 2010, 05:33 PM
hmm, not bad.. not bad at all! its great i like it :). I hope you continue to write!
Emo Pictures - RawrBittenTwice14
RawrBittenTwice14
Posts: 53
Dec 08 2010, 08:10 AM
ahaa i will :)

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