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In the end, as we fade into the night. Who will tell the story of your life? And who will remember your last goodbye? 'Cause it's the end, and I'm not afraid to die. In The End, by Black Veil Brides

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Emo Pictures - RawrBittenTwice14
RawrBittenTwice14
Posts: 53
Some Genral thing I Just Thought Up :) Dec 01 2010, 08:46 AM
Fists of time pound me, Eyes, so blue confound me, Desires, like you a phantom upon my life, Are no longer, for you are not without sacrifice. Oh slit temptations throat, Cut mine eyes in them wrote, Your sadistic name, again - again Neither life's epic beauty or magic, relieves this pain. Heaven you would think, Would call me from this brink, Again I claim the flickering fires, That come from unearthly, terrible desires. So here it is when I conclude, What frauds fickle men, those that do delude are, for the savour of earth, the white robed speaker, Desires God's sweet praise- Evil abhorrent, desires gentle leaker.

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18358
Dec 02 2010, 02:28 PM
Good work!
xxOneLastGoodnightxx
Posts: 149
Dec 02 2010, 02:38 PM
Great job :)
Emo Pictures - RawrBittenTwice14
RawrBittenTwice14
Posts: 53
Dec 06 2010, 09:45 AM
thanks :)
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Dec 06 2010, 05:33 PM
hmm, not bad.. not bad at all! its great i like it :). I hope you continue to write!
Emo Pictures - RawrBittenTwice14
RawrBittenTwice14
Posts: 53
Dec 08 2010, 08:10 AM
ahaa i will :)

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