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If my soul was torn would you help? Would you try and fix me? Would you help unbreak me? I won't give in, by Asking alexandria

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Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Wish we die? Dec 31 2010, 09:56 AM
Hope in bottom less pits Hope in craters of dung Hope in what we miss. Why miss The taste Of death’s kiss? Sweet the scorpion’s sting White- The lightning strike Slow the poison’s work Tight the thunder’s grip Sing – The chorus over and over But – The lyrics are missing… The soul is missing The tune is dismal The piano is broke And the key is awful The wedding song sucks And the marriage is a scam The ring a thing? The diamond shining The baby is whining- The couple is smiling Without teeth- We wear fake gold. This is getting old? Fate is marrying death But we ain’t dying We trying, but God ain’t buying it- SO…. Make like Count Dracula And suck it all up- Count to 10 and start all over again, The cure is not in the knife- It’s in the blood It’s not in the gun It’s in the trigger- Do you believe in love written on a bullet? No- I believe in love written in Blood Wrenched in suffering Conquering- What makes the world go round Is love… Stephen December 31 2010 ©

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Emo Pictures - Miss_Murderpants
Miss_Murderpants
Posts: 14
Jan 01 2011, 10:25 AM
Awe..I like this one. I found it well written and the usage of words were great keep writing more stuff like this. ;)
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 01 2011, 10:42 AM
thanks for the nice insightful comment!
Emo Pictures - xXSuicidal_AngelXx
xXSuicidal_AngelXx
Posts: 5
Jan 01 2011, 02:40 PM
i really loved this one greattt!!
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 01 2011, 07:01 PM
glad you liked it and thanks for the comment! much appreciated!
Emo Pictures - xXkuraiyoruXx
xXkuraiyoruXx
Posts: 164
Jan 07 2011, 06:25 PM
Oh my God that.....is to true.......
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 07 2011, 06:31 PM
:)

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