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Remind yourself, That they are the ones who will hold you still, My thoughts exploding in thousands of pieces (Thousands of pieces) It looks so beautiful when, I know it's not love Come Close, by Saosin

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101
as i go insane Jan 08 2011, 03:06 AM
i am alone confused by what i clearly understand my mind swimming in the cold embrace of my bed i feel light headed but this mind doesnt wanna land did i dream those men is is my mind have this planned i hesitate to open my eyes as i know what greets me may never be true and in front of me an ecstasy of people laughing scowling at my little figure missing its legs my body begins to convulse and ache as my mind paints the pale shade of blue my room begins to spin yet i remain still as my body has to beg i hear its calls and as i take my first steps on my own my legs collapse as my windows dissapear as i stare up at what i can't do my door morphs into a cone and as my mother enters through it she has become clear I fall down With a frown without my crown i am lost i need to come around

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TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101
Jan 08 2011, 03:07 AM
this song is meant to have some long lines and some short ones to emphasise the going insane part and if you wish to know this was wrote from personal experiance i got hooked on the drug ketamine two years back
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Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 08 2011, 04:55 AM
well written, and it's a good poem! K days didn't sound too fun though...
TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101
Jan 08 2011, 06:54 AM
if taking ketamine made me what i am i never regert it
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Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 08 2011, 07:59 AM
How did it make you who are today? ( If u dnt mind me asking) oh m I wanted to know if kebtamine efected the way u wrote e poetry.
TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101
Jan 08 2011, 11:05 AM
Ketamine was my way of coping with life althought through it i became the smart talking seuth saying clever boy i am now

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