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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

eMoKiDfrmNorWay
Posts: 68
The sketch in black and white Jan 10 2011, 07:42 AM
The passionless branch you call life, fades away in time as you stare at a blurry future not knowing why, your heart is so withered and your soul is so lost. You never cared; and to what cost. As you stand there over his grave, reminding yourself of that time you could be brave. You blame yourself for the death of a person who lived a life in black and white. If you had turned around, would he still be around?

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Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 10 2011, 07:49 AM
nice one! creative and an interesting little twist ^^
eMoKiDfrmNorWay
Posts: 68
Jan 10 2011, 07:59 AM
thanks ^^
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7253
Jan 10 2011, 09:27 AM
Nu ska vi se om min norska som Jag ska prøva nu ær rätt xD : denne dikten ær kempebra og morsom :] og jeg elsker den og den var veldigt djup og kreativ <3 folk fra norge ær best ! Xx
eMoKiDfrmNorWay
Posts: 68
Jan 10 2011, 11:39 AM
haha^^ Det er rett norsk, men grammatikken er litt feil :P Rett vile vært: Dette diktet er kjempebra og morsomt, jeg elsker det og det var veldig dypt og kreativt Men bra forsøk (y) :D jeg tørr ikke prøve meg på svensk for da kommer du til å le deg ihjel xDDD :D
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7253
Jan 10 2011, 11:52 AM
Ok :] haha norska är ett gulligt språk <3 aww men det skulle vara kul om du försökte skriva på svenska någon gång ;-) :]

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