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My angel close your eyes, I'll be your lover tonight. I'm tired of trying. I'm sick of the waiting! If there's nothing that I can do. A pitiful lullaby to sing the tortured to sleep lullaby of the crucified, by Alesana

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eMoKiDfrmNorWay
Posts: 68
A new twist in my writing ^^ Jan 14 2011, 08:34 AM
Under the moonlight above the crystal clear water Stand a girl and a boy her skin glows like a diamond in the pure light love blossoms fast and strong as the pearl-white rose in the purest hope the feeling of escaping darkness on a sky of dope The darkness that once swallowed them whole Took a pair of half hearts and glued them together made them whole her lips touch his the moon changes to the shape of a heart once more hope has shown worthy for the little apocalypse in the head of the misguided souls, who's blood drips over the devil's bed with an irongrip; pure love washed away the hollow patterns they called their body

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RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Jan 14 2011, 08:57 AM
Tis very good ^_^
eMoKiDfrmNorWay
Posts: 68
Jan 14 2011, 08:59 AM
thank you ^^ i'd hope to be able to write in different.....eh...aspects other than darkness and about being lost and having no faith ;P
ChocolateBubbles
Posts: 163
Jan 14 2011, 09:11 AM
Touching:> Omfg I sound pervy o.O Okai...ignore meh...I'm some random gurl...But I loved the poem ^-^ Oh btw, when I saw title, I thought you changed your writing style XD Ah, I'm so gay :>
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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Jan 14 2011, 10:27 AM
good :D <333333333333333333333333 x
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jan 14 2011, 04:14 PM
ChocolateBubbles sure is so gay. Anyway I liked this poem :]
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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Jan 15 2011, 01:30 AM
^ <3 to the person above :]! x
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Vybz
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Jan 15 2011, 05:41 AM
nice! * thumbs up*
ChocolateBubbles
Posts: 163
Jan 15 2011, 06:25 AM
I'm gonna smile cos' I have no idea what you meant :>

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