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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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broken life Feb 06 2011, 12:29 PM

its things in life that can be breaking, like shattered glass it can be taking, what could things in life like this be making. When the life is most cold, You thought there were someone to hold, but there were just ugly things to be told.

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Pagan
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Feb 07 2011, 03:00 AM

i like it, the last verse could be the into to another longer poem tho its very nice.

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Feb 07 2011, 03:12 AM

thanks and yeah i know it could but yeah i wasnt in the mood to make it longer than that when i wrote it ... x

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Pagan
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Feb 07 2011, 03:56 AM

HAHHAA i completely understand tht lols x

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Feb 07 2011, 04:13 AM

ok...lol well i was sad when i wrote that so i don't think its something to laugh about.. x

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Pagan
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Feb 07 2011, 04:15 AM

i didnt meant to laugh at tht love, just the agh makin it worse -tip toes waway- sorry

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Feb 07 2011, 04:18 AM

well its ok :) ..i am a very forgiving person ..:D x

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