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8r0n70
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No title Feb 23 2011, 10:55 AM

These is some lines intended to become a song, never finished it tho. i taste your sweet lips and once again i feel you close my head starts spinning and i feel my black heart beating red drops on the floor why am i doing this to myself please wash away the tears why am i doing this to you the stars make me think, think of you you look so good, smiling at me your smile warms my, my black heart why do i get this cold feeling

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xxOneLastGoodnightxx
Posts: 149

Feb 23 2011, 11:59 AM

kind of made me shiver, these are great lyrics..really hits deep inside reading them..very meaningful, the words feel so full of emotion

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Glass_Tears
Posts: 272

Feb 23 2011, 12:12 PM

i love it! :) It's full of emotion this will make a good part to a song :)

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Feb 23 2011, 02:34 PM

You've made a great impact on the forums already. Thanks :]

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8r0n70
Posts: 280

Feb 23 2011, 05:44 PM

Thanks alot for the response :) I'll see if I finish the song one of these days, if the creativity takes hold of me again. Thanks Matt, I like to contribute to an active forum :)

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