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lostcause
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Emerald Eyes Feb 27 2011, 04:30 AM

Emerald Eyes Your emerald eyes they make me shy, A million times I wonder why, I’ve never ever felt this way, I still don’t want to feel this way. You’re my weakness, you’re my fall, I panic when you don’t call, Show some mercy on this fool, And break me from your spell. You’re lips so soft, your touch divine, Gives me the feeling well be just fine, I never want to see you go, Why wont your true feelings show? You’re my little angel you, But you can be a devil too, Show some mercy on this fool, And break me from your spell.

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Feb 27 2011, 06:46 AM

I'm impressed :]

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lostcause
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Feb 27 2011, 09:51 AM

thank youu :)

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xxOneLastGoodnightxx
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Feb 27 2011, 01:46 PM

Aww this is so romantic..yet heartbreaking at the same time..you really have a talent at writing :) I really loved this one..read through it a bunch of times ^^ It in a way creates picturess and images in my mind reading it..great poem

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