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Jay_Jay
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Scribbles from inside Jun 14 2011, 02:36 PM

I can feel you taking over I see you im my deepest dreams I always feel your breath upon my shoulder As stupid as that may seem Your love is like a rope around my neck How tight do you want it to be Choking me with every step When will you set me free For 2 years you dragged me down I let you cause me pain But dont you make another sound You aint hurting me again Im cutting the rope and walking free Theres nothing you can do The time has come for you to see That girl... I dont need you

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Jun 14 2011, 03:40 PM

*speachless* that was just ..such an amazing poem is exactly how i feel about my abusive ex bf ...keep up the good work x

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Jay_Jay
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Jun 15 2011, 06:40 AM

Thanks so much, its exactly how i felt with my ex gf... Life goes on and we continue to get stronger... dont let anyone ever put you down, ur amazing and dont let anyone make you think otherwise =)

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