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Red sweat Oct 29 2011, 08:02 PM
Pain comes ripping, and everything goes numb As a drop of red sweat grows on my arm Now that everything's black, the red drop calls out for me proving my existence, not living but rather existing close to the end, I look at this arm, feels so good with these overwhelming cuts, deeper deeper deeper than my skin, deeper than my veins deeper than any other feeling I have ever felt or ever will feel So smooth and crucial, but never want it to end the pleasure is amazing, death comes ripping As I look down at my arm, and look at your smile it's not for me so I let my arm have it once in a while, let it bleed, let it bleed, let it bleed. Let my arm shed red tears The burst skin and your name tonight it's the end of all my fears the cuts and your name! Yes it killed when you disappeared the pouring blood and your name? And now on my arm, your scars appeared love it, love you, love it, love you The pattern of my cuts gives me a reason to live but the darkness calls out for me, that I dont want to live without you pain comes ripping...tears of blood...pain comes ripping, poison in my veins pain comes ripping, and those red stains..stains, pain ends ripping..... and ends with a new bracelet.

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nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Oct 30 2011, 07:55 AM
wow your poem creates imagery and is so powerfully written. Amazing ^_^
Deleted User
Oct 30 2011, 10:21 AM
Thanks, I love making poems about how I feel
xToxic_Pandax
Posts: 78
Oct 30 2011, 12:06 PM
That is awesome, seriously, it's so emotional. :)
Deleted User
Jun 12 2012, 05:02 PM
thanks :)

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