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xxxEvexxx
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the girl Feb 29 2012, 11:48 PM

this poem was written for heather but it could be for many others too, please tell me what you think. btw heather is going through a rough patch so it may sound a bit weird beautiful yet oh so sad so confused, what can she do? a butterfly with broken wings she wanders slowly into the cave of never ending misery I've been there myself it is scary and dark but i return there every week i dont want her to suffer through all the pain i want to bring her back but when i try to speak to her the words refuse to come damn it, how i want to save her but find it impossible i cant even look her in the eye for fear that she will see through me she must think i'm horrible a selfish little brat i'm sorry if you think that i hope this poem explains that nothing is your fault please dont go into the cave because once your in you cant get out it will swallow you up whole remember you are perfect in every single way

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Mar 01 2012, 02:13 AM

i love it <3

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slitwrist123
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Mar 01 2012, 07:48 AM

itz amazing :p

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xxxEvexxx
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Mar 01 2012, 11:27 PM

thank you im glad you both liked it :)

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jaz1127
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Mar 02 2012, 04:33 AM

love it u are an amazing poet u should do it profesionally no jokes :) x

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Mar 03 2012, 08:54 AM

I loved it :)

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Vybz
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Mar 04 2012, 09:07 AM

This is a very sweet poem. I like your use of imagery as well. :)

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xxxEvexxx
Posts: 75

Mar 04 2012, 12:52 PM

thanks guys it means a lot that you like them...oh yeah and before when i said both i meant all :D anyway glad you like it *huggs to everyone who said they liked it*

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