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SilverDust144
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Fallen Angel Mar 29 2012, 10:39 PM

I wrote this poem not too long ago, please no copying it. Fallen Angel My once Angelic face turns to stone Nothing but the expressions of bitterness appear Laughter no longer fills me Light no longer surrounds me The dark constricts itself around me And to the touch, everything is ice Once glacier Blue eyes turn to stone gray Angelic and gentle hands, turn withered and warped A glorious body turns to a shrunken shell Bright hair so Bronze, turns dull and Black with hate Glorious snow White Angel wings turn to Black Raven wings Envy envelops me as I watch those around me feel what I can't All I feel is Pain And why you may ask? Because I dared to sin I committed the worst sin of them all for an angel I fell in love I fell to temptation Passion enveloped me Fire burned in my blood And for that, My angelicness was taken away!

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Mar 30 2012, 05:17 PM

It's very good :)

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SilverDust144
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Mar 30 2012, 07:48 PM

Thank you

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