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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

nobody_cares
Posts: 253
Mo May 31 2012, 03:00 PM
Mo helped me through my depression last year. She really did save my life that day. Feel free to post any improvements There was me No way out As far as I could see. Contemplating the Many ways I could die. The memory Still makes me cry It was may, No way out Is all I can say There was nothing That could have Made me stay There was me, And the uneaten pizza You came, Sat next to me. Before you My life was meaningless, Grey. I never said But you saved my life That day. It's you I owe My closest friend, Mo

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thosedays
Posts: 8
May 31 2012, 05:59 PM
i lv this! it's simple.. and powerful!~~
nobody_cares
Posts: 253
Jun 01 2012, 01:07 AM
Thanks :)
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Xx-EmoBeemo-xX
Posts: 47
Jun 01 2012, 06:50 AM
I like how it rhymes and still makes since. It has a lot of feeling and emotion in it. My favorite part: And the uneaten pizza. Now I'm hungry >.> love the poem tho! <3
nobody_cares
Posts: 253
Jun 01 2012, 02:22 PM
thanks :) the last two lines were the hardest to rhyme without ruining the poem... Lol your comment made me hungry now
thosedays
Posts: 8
Jun 01 2012, 09:05 PM
it's so touching! i lv it
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18346
Jun 02 2012, 08:38 AM
Love it too :)

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