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Emo Pictures - rYrY
rYrY
Posts: 5
Expression (Redraft) Aug 24 2012, 05:07 PM
Patterns of shadows conceal him still, They dance to the tune of the whistling wind, A lonely man, sat cold upon this hill, The clouded horizon drawing near. A greyscale wall of cold jagged stone, An overhang of leaves, shelter from the rain, He spoke, in soft and tender tone. Tears making peace upon his murmer, "I want to tell you, Dear, of all the things I feel. How you saved my soul, turned around my life, Wiped away the past and took my hand." Brushing away his dark matted hair he rose, He wiped the tears which stained his cheeks, Revealing a smile in which he took repose, Step by step he strode this way, Untold stories shimmered in his eyes, He gestured for my hand then whispered, "My mother once told me, that every real man cries."

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Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4198
Aug 25 2012, 12:37 PM
meaningful ...well done :)
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Aug 25 2012, 02:49 PM
^ indeed it is. Deep stuff and a good read!

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