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Emo Pictures - lexie247
lexie247
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What do you think of my lyrics? Sep 08 2012, 08:35 PM
They aren't very good and I'm still working on them. But give an honest opinion or how I could approve them? Thanks(: "Someday you'll forget me I'll be one of your lost memories. And maybe, I'll forget you too. We've gone our separate ways. Day's and nights pass and they fade. Haven't heard a word from you. Now breaking inside, From the tears that I've cried. It shouldn't have ended this way. I need you by my side To hold me through the night. But I need to realize It's time for goodbye. Oh. It's time for goodbye." And then here's a separate piece I'm working on. "Why is when you're around me, I want you to hold me close? To tell me that you love me. To tell me I mean the most. Wipe away my tears, And whisper in my ear. Tell me you're not leaving. Tell me you won't dissapear," So give me your opinions?

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Emo Pictures - DizzyDotRocks
DizzyDotRocks
Posts: 830
Sep 09 2012, 10:00 AM
I quite like both sets of lyrics :) only thing is, I can't put them to a tune in my head. Have you got a tune for them?
Emo Pictures - lexie247
lexie247
Posts: 3
Sep 09 2012, 06:31 PM
I have a tune in my head for them. It's a soft song. So I've tried playing the piano along with them.
Emo Pictures - XxSydneyScreamerxX
XxSydneyScreamerxX
Posts: 1
Sep 10 2012, 02:26 PM
Awesome ! you are a great song writer !
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18324
Sep 11 2012, 02:08 PM
I like them and would love to hear them on a video sometime.
zenia101
Posts: 219
Sep 14 2012, 12:32 PM
i think that they are amazing. u should deffinetly get the tunes and post them i would be totally phykd to hear both of them i ahve wrote a few songs of my own but noe of them are as good as urs r.

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