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StarlightSoliloquy
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Heartfelt Torn Jun 30 2013, 06:38 PM

My body feels broken and my heart feels destroyed The words you left unspoken were still beyond void I swore that night silent would be my last request You counter acted backwards with your hands moving fast. So what did you want from me? What did you need? Where was this fantasy where is the scene? When does it end where can we go? Will you ever quit will you ever know? Pain painted memories will cast this shadow across The long forgotten soil torn into moss With blood running down the walls you scream out a name One that means nothing more than subtle sustain Which end do you prefer which way will you choose The waters have risen and you're about to lose. Please listen now and open your eyes The coldness you left me was at all no surprise My heart torn to shreds with a blackened steel blade Againsst cold skin and across my veins You stood in silence while I wait in terror Yet still you don't care whatever I try for I tried to save you I tried to love But instead you left and so now I'm above With the angels crying and a soul left unreached You could've told me you never loved me..

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emofuck
Posts: 10

Jul 07 2013, 02:52 PM

I love your poem, ive never read anything like it before. Ive read alot of poems on here and yours is by far the best one ive ever read, you have a real gift. Keep it up!!!!! MAKE SURE YOU KEEP WRITING AND POSTING THEM!!!!!!! and if this is based on something that happened to u im so sorry they obviously didnt know how lucky they were to have you!!!

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StarlightSoliloquy
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Jul 08 2013, 06:49 PM

thanks, its actually lyrics, i sing and play guitar

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emofuck
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Jul 09 2013, 04:36 AM

WOW!!!!! you can really sing and ur guitar skills make mine look sad...how did u learn to scream like that. i was watchin some more of your videos, and the one that u did a Hawthorne Heights cover and it was u & ur gfs song.....was that the girl the song/poem was written 4

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StarlightSoliloquy
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Jul 12 2013, 08:13 PM

no that was off the top of my head

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emofuck
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Jul 13 2013, 05:27 PM

well its still very impressive

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