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FullCircle
Posts: 27
What could never be... Nov 17 2013, 05:36 PM
Too often I find myself thinking of what could never be And I'm shattered when I realize I'll never kiss her Or hold her Or feel her perfect hair That I could never be to her what she is to me She is the unattainable dream that I have been waiting for for so long ------------------------------------------------- This is the first poem I've ever released publicly, what do you think?? Inspired by Slipknot and the love of my life.

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Emo Pictures - dustinb
dustinb
Posts: 6
Nov 17 2013, 08:14 PM
its pretty good :)
FullCircle
Posts: 27
Nov 17 2013, 08:30 PM
Thank you c:
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Nov 18 2013, 09:46 AM
I feel your pain bro! It shows some poetic skill. Keep writing and emulating famous writers; read lyrics by your favorite band and you'll get better!
FullCircle
Posts: 27
Nov 18 2013, 01:41 PM
Thanks for the tip bro! Will do c:
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Nov 19 2013, 06:47 AM
anytime, man

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