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This is for the kids with the beaten in lips Whose parents try to shut them up using their fists Keep living loud and proud They never can hold you down Beaten In Lips, by Beartooth

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

FullCircle
Posts: 27
What could never be... Nov 17 2013, 05:36 PM
Too often I find myself thinking of what could never be And I'm shattered when I realize I'll never kiss her Or hold her Or feel her perfect hair That I could never be to her what she is to me She is the unattainable dream that I have been waiting for for so long ------------------------------------------------- This is the first poem I've ever released publicly, what do you think?? Inspired by Slipknot and the love of my life.

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Emo Pictures - dustinb
dustinb
Posts: 6
Nov 17 2013, 08:14 PM
its pretty good :)
FullCircle
Posts: 27
Nov 17 2013, 08:30 PM
Thank you c:
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Nov 18 2013, 09:46 AM
I feel your pain bro! It shows some poetic skill. Keep writing and emulating famous writers; read lyrics by your favorite band and you'll get better!
FullCircle
Posts: 27
Nov 18 2013, 01:41 PM
Thanks for the tip bro! Will do c:
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Nov 19 2013, 06:47 AM
anytime, man

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