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Shyemogirlx
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Look to yourself. (Opinions please?) Mar 05 2014, 05:47 PM

Any feedback would be really appreciated:) Why do I have to work hard for things that others get handed on a sliver platter, Why do girls become popular just for being loud and bitchy, When the genuinely nice people will never seem to matter. Why do people suffer from the pain that others give them, get knowbody seems to care because they're in invisible. Yet the ones who are causing the pain seem just so kissable. That's just life I hear you say well it shouldn't have to be this way! People pretending not to see just because it's easier not too, Open your eyes to the pain happening around you. Believe me I know how it feels, But iv come to realise there's nothing I can do to change people lies and deals, Well, I have a message for people who are going through the same. I know the first part of this poem must explain what your thinking, But I saved myself and that's the way it's always going to be, and nothing's ever going to change because well, "That's just life" unfortunately. Never let anyone's choices effect yours, And I hope the message if this poem has got through to you, Because you are the one who's opening the doors, You will only ever have control over yourself and what you say others can either choose to accept that or walk away.

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corlan
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Mar 06 2014, 03:04 AM

I think its pretty good and I agree with u

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Mar 06 2014, 12:53 PM

I enjoyed it :)

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WakingTheReaper_
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Mar 08 2014, 12:42 AM

The truth c;

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