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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Eternalxox
Posts: 157
Fear Jun 18 2014, 11:08 AM
Torn apart Ignoring me Protecting me Taken from me Abandonment All of these are ways I've lost people I loved EAch time is a new scare on my heart There's to many to count I don't like making friends I don't like people noticing me I don't want to lose anymore It's my fear Please don't leave me Whoever I have left You are my family My love My best friends Please Don't go Not again...

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Emo Pictures - EyeWings
EyeWings
Posts: 287
Jun 18 2014, 11:14 AM
That is beautiful! I love the symmetry of this poem, how you first explain how you've lost people and then whom you've lost and the fear of loosing everyone you have left, it is a very raw insight into the panic and "fear" of feeling isolated, you should be very proud of it! ;)
Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4198
Jun 18 2014, 11:17 AM
like it , keep it up! :)
Eternalxox
Posts: 157
Jun 18 2014, 11:57 AM
Thanks Kate and Liz yeah I lost a lot and now my only fear is losing more

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