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Kissed_by_shadowsx
Posts: 13
I try my best Jun 20 2014, 11:42 AM
I've never been great at writing poems or anything but I've tried to put as much effort as I can into this I try my best to hide my fears Even through heart throbbed tears I cry each night without fail Not even leaving a scent or trail Each day without you is incomplete I even find it hard to eat It may be silly but it's true Without you my arm turns black and blue You may find this hard to believe But cutting my arm is what I achieve All through the cold and bitter pain I'm not sure if I'll stay the same I know it seems a threat to you But I'm sure in another life you'll love me too Sorry i know it's not great but I want opinions on it as if it's good enough I might add more to it and create a song out of it

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Eternalxox
Posts: 157
Jun 20 2014, 02:00 PM
It's great! But remember not all poems need to rhyme love just have meaning and heart in them mine don't rhyme but u can tell I truly feel the way I say and there's meaning to them so just put what u think on the page and that's all. Hope I helped

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