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Emo Pictures - HeartsAndRazors
HeartsAndRazors
Posts: 25
The Sun And The Moon Jan 30 2015, 07:43 PM
Tell me the story about how the sun loved the moon so much he died every night just so she can breathe thats how I feel for you We can be the sun and the moon. Just take my hand and darling you'll see we are meant to be

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Emo Pictures - EyeWings
EyeWings
Posts: 287
Jan 31 2015, 02:58 PM
This is very simple but also very powerful, the imagery of the sun and the moon and how he "died every night to let her breathe" is a very strong line! Well done! :)
Emo Pictures - Kate
Kate
Posts: 4198
Feb 01 2015, 06:25 AM
like this :)
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18358
Feb 02 2015, 12:56 PM
I like it too!
Emo Pictures - vanityfair
vanityfair
Posts: 115
Feb 02 2015, 03:02 PM
<3

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