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MadAngel98
Posts: 19

I need opinions! Apr 13 2015, 01:36 AM

I wrote this for a girl that confessed her love for me. I need opinions please. I must be losing my mind I've been to hell a thousand times And I don't I don't know if I'm dead yet My angel, are you real or in my head? These gods make me time to waste Just to laugh at my naïve mistakes But I know That I don't ever learn My dear, Angel, just watch me burn And I'll run And I'll run And I'll run Just to wind up next to you You may be an Angel But there's a whole new world of magic I can show you So, please, please, please be true to me I'm just so sick of hallucinating

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xXxBlackSnowxXx
Posts: 5

Apr 13 2015, 01:48 AM

Its beautiful~ I really like the poem <3 I can see it becoming a really good song actually :) I'm sure she will love it too! Good luck~

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MadAngel98
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Apr 13 2015, 05:53 AM

Thank you <3 I'm glad, someone likes it

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EnderSaysScrewYou
Posts: 129

Apr 13 2015, 06:18 AM

HEY SENPAI I AGREE WITH BLACK SNOW LADY WHOS µP THERE ^^ ya know like up there ^^^ like above your post^^^^ right there ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ right... ok imma stop now but anywayssssss i agree with her its rly nice and if u decide to be with her I FULLY SUPPORT YOU #LETGAYMARRIAGEANDRELATIONSHIPSBELEGALANDNONJUDGEMENATLEVERYWHERE

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MadAngel98
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Apr 13 2015, 06:53 AM

Thanks Ender <3

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