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hiding_in_the_dark
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If This Were A Suicide Note Apr 13 2015, 05:06 PM

Ink Bleeds, Lined Paper, Apology Letter, Blood Splatter, All These things that went onto, a piece of paper. If this were, a suicide note, I wouldn't know where to go, I'd try to start, I'd try to stop, I'd write my feelings, I'd try to do my job, I'd throw it away, I'd start again, I'd repeat the steps, And try to begin, If this were my suicide note, I'd tell you what went wrong, I'd tell you who not to trust, and write a song, I'd write how I bled every night, I'd write how I cried, and tried to be polite. If this were my suicide note, I'd tell you how much it hurt, I'd tell you how they all made me feel like dirt I'd say that I never loved, Never felt, Never shoved. If this were my suicide note, I'd write a story, One that's not ending in glory. If this were my note, I'd tell you about the drugs, I'd tell you how they made me feel loved. But some notes are not meant to be written, Sometimes you just got to keep livin, But if this were to me my last wish, I'd tell you my live was not all bliss

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EnderSaysScrewYou
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Apr 13 2015, 10:07 PM

So Nice and beautiful

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Apr 14 2015, 03:21 PM

^agreed!

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Apr 21 2015, 12:09 PM

That was awesome

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Scarlett_rose
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Apr 30 2015, 07:50 AM

while reading this beautiful piece of written art, goosebumps brushed my skin, and a flush touched my cheeks by these sorrowful words.

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DarknessInside
Posts: 16

May 13 2015, 08:10 AM

Brilliant. So dark but so reflective.

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