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That day never came, that day never comes.I'm not lettin' go, I keep hangin' on.Everybody says that time heals the pain.I've been waitin' forever, that day never came That Day, by Tokio Hotel

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Jemmy
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Reality (its an old poem i wrote years back) Nov 11 2015, 12:28 AM
Sweet little smile Innocent eyes Naive life Her reflexion, the reality? A permanant frown Dead Glassy, eyes Lost all hope, no way out. She dreams to be The person she once was She dreams to laugh And wave all her problems off But the weight on her shoulders Is dragging her down She tries to scream It doesnt make a sound.

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18235
Nov 11 2015, 12:10 PM
I really like this thanks for sharing it Jemmy =]
Emo Pictures - MaximusStephonovich
MaximusStephonovich
Posts: 212
Nov 21 2015, 03:26 AM
Very good Jemmy, Very good. Though you are going to have to forgive me. I cannot see the rhythm. There is no AA or AB or CC or AC Or anything like it.

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