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I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut My weakness is that I care too much, And my scars remind me that the past is real, I tear my heart open just to feel... Scars, by Papa Roach

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The sky May 08 2016, 10:26 PM
I've never written a poem before, but I'm finding it a good outlet for the heartbreak I'm experiencing If I was asked to quantify how much I love you, I would say "look up at the sky and count the stars" But the Stars have now faded, Only a glimmer through the clouds, Mist pushes the star always, Their light and beauty pains, Their warmth wallows. The mist: stagnant and stubborn will eventually shallow, And the clouds will whisper. The Stars will shine brighter and more beautiful than ever before, For a new observer. Laughing amongst the mountain, The sky will give birth to new burning flames.

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Emo Pictures - xJoHnNYxRiNGoX
xJoHnNYxRiNGoX
Posts: 27
May 08 2016, 11:49 PM
I really loved this, the imagery is stunning and your choice of words is amazing <3
Emo Pictures - monsters_in_me_
monsters_in_me_
Posts: 9
Jul 04 2016, 02:34 PM
agreed ^

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