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It's not so much the pain It's more the actual knife Pretending, the picture is perfect I cut myself to sleep I close my eyes for a second And meet a fragile soul I scream to hide that I'm lonely The echo calls my name Take this life, by In Flames

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NoSympathy4TheWicked
Posts: 45
"Your A Judge At A Courthouse" ~ NoSympathy4TheWicked Jun 07 2016, 09:33 PM
The big glass doors at school show my emotions, Why must you judge me? I am not popular, in any sports, or dating a jock, or anybody, I am Outcast, I am not you, nor am I the people you hang out with, If you like judging people, go to a courthouse! What's so bad about yourself that you must bring others down? As your friends laugh, I walk quickly past you, You say my music is terrible, I say my music saves lives, You ask if I cut myself, I say no, You tell me that all "Emos" cut, I want to punch you in the face, I don't say anything, Walking quickly past you, I feel people staring at me, My friends don't like the way I dress, Nor the music that I listen to, They say their not judging me, But I know they are, Why must you judge me? I thought you were supposed to be my friends, Before I break, go be a judge at a courthouse! You love to judge, don't you?

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WayOfLife
Posts: 75
Jun 08 2016, 05:14 AM
This one is not so good, then the other ones, because it is short and you repeat the words in this short poem. That's why I would prefer the three ones before. Doesn't mean it's bad, but not so good as the other ones.
NoSympathy4TheWicked
Posts: 45
Jun 08 2016, 10:20 AM
Yep thats what I was thinking. Im considering re-writing it.:)

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