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but you chose evil ways instead of love. Lord Of This World, by Black Sabbath

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Emo Pictures - naira666
naira666
Posts: 132
-breakup Nov 18 2008, 07:31 AM
i feel so dim for loving him falling for his trap it was a whole load of crap i knew it was too good to be true the second time he said we were through my heart literally broke i couldnt believe it was a joke the things we did made me realise im not a kid i feel so cheap and used if my family knew, i'd be bruised

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victhevamp
Posts: 2303
Nov 18 2008, 11:59 AM
oooo i didnt see that last line coming, very good x
Emo Pictures - naira666
naira666
Posts: 132
Nov 19 2008, 07:27 AM
lol yup thanks :)
Emo Pictures - Pagan
Pagan
Posts: 605
Dec 12 2008, 01:47 PM
wow thats a really goood poem really good last line well done shame bout the guy though. Pagan
Emo Pictures - Coldsoul
Coldsoul
Posts: 47
Jan 12 2009, 02:07 AM

This was a very strong and awesome poem!

Loved it <3

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