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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Continuous Poem Nov 23 2008, 10:39 AM

Anyone bothered about making a poem between all of us? You know I post a line, then someone else etc. I'm not too bothered about the structure as long as the last word rhymes. "Footsteps crunch in the soft snow"

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Jun 04 2009, 07:39 AM

The love soon festers within my soul I know whom is meant to be my goal She is the one I have forever known She is my one true love foretold

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Jeff_MCRnutter
Posts: 332

Jun 04 2009, 10:07 AM

but her back turns, her shadow fades
and in my back i feel the sting of her shining blade

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Jun 04 2009, 12:23 PM

The blade of shining light
It glistens in the night
A blade that will bring forth new light
Like this blade i hold my true love thight

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Jun 04 2009, 01:42 PM

the love I feel stirs my soul Happiness without her shall never be known blinded by her purist soul if I lose her I shall never be known

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Deleted User

Jun 05 2009, 08:46 AM

Knowing myself, is such a task,
It's more challenging behind a mask.
What I do know is that they're for me,
In their eyes I'd be lost for infinity.

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Jun 05 2009, 07:50 PM

I used to be her infinity
But now I'm just the minority
How could this happen to me?
Why wont loneliness leave me be?

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ava
Posts: 45

Jun 07 2009, 07:50 PM

lonliness come be my ally and make me free, this hurt is so unreal and shudn't be... wat happened to becoming a princess lyk in the story books i read? love pains have come only to fill my pointless life with dread.

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Jun 08 2009, 11:23 AM

only pains to make more dead Suicidal thoughts inside ones head Thoughts that don't solve a thing but only trouble do they bring Its better to hold up your head Be strong and live instead For the patient gain more than the hard headed Open your eyes and see the light Maybe you will find that love is in sight Maybe if you had just waited one more night..

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ava
Posts: 45

Jun 08 2009, 07:59 PM

waiting,hoping,wishing this is not a fairy tell that will be saved with kissing. my life is pointless and not worth livng, my last breaths, to him i'm giving. pointless love and meaningless longing, razors cant kill the pain,that i am holding. i cry to sleep and wake hoping i'm dead, the pain is so deep i'm surprised my soul hasn't bled. it will be over soon, i will make sure, only his words, his heart will be the cure.

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-Peices-of-Me-
Posts: 42

Jun 11 2009, 04:49 PM

i keep waiting procrastinating wishing you could see me for who i am not what you want me to be and sometimes i like to dress up and pretend that i'm pretty but then ill catch sight of myself in the mirror and my smile slips, my hands fall to my sides, i slip down the wall and sit there and cry cause it was all in my mind

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Jun 17 2009, 06:40 PM

The mind can be tricky at times It's like an abridged confusion of space and time Only thing time isn't on my side Not at all, time is just the prolonging of suffering I wish i could take away all my time Just cock up and die,with no one by my side Just like I've always lived my my life

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xEvilEmox
Posts: 264

Aug 06 2009, 05:03 AM

I won't run away anymore Got tired of lying to myself got tired of sitting in the dark corner just like a shelf I want to scream out I want to be free… Made my heart into a stone Dried all my tears hard just like a bone i cover my ears To scream out I want to be free… Seasons are changing Days and nights are taking turns But my life keeps going down to the bottom now my heart aches and burns I want to scream out I want to be free… Lost in the darkness and sorrow will I ever see daylight again? Will the sun rise tomorrow? or is it going to rain? sobbing and crying I sit under a tree hopeless, I wonder will I ever be free?

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Aug 07 2009, 03:27 PM

My freedom is a state of mind I am constricted by my darkest fears, by the thought of losing the one most dear Every aching hour my metal death draws nearer I see that i am breaking down when i stare into the mirror I try to smile the mirror breaks revealing my truly sad face

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Deleted User

Aug 08 2009, 04:20 PM

This poem it's in pieces Just like my heart And you'll not bring it back with kisses Anyway this is poetry, this is art

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Aug 09 2009, 08:53 AM

Art of love can fade away It's beauty evident but it won't always stay Few find art like Michelangelo preserved and admired even envied I wish that one day i can paint my own picture too A picture holding hands with someone whose love is true

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XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272

Aug 21 2009, 01:21 PM

im on my bare scratched knees cant you see you are my air but since you left me i can no longer breath,so here i go, i leave, all because you did not want to be with me

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Dec 29 2009, 08:51 AM

maybe soon you will truly see Life will be better, just you and me

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just_emo_me_
Posts: 100

Jan 04 2010, 09:28 PM

i wait and wait i try to be your bait but you never come around you hurt me and left without a sound how can you turn away and pretend everythings ok? when im dieing inside the arrow missed wide

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18358

Jan 05 2010, 01:12 PM

I sometimes wonder, why oh why do I even try Maybe life will be easier if I just let it out and cry.

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just_emo_me_
Posts: 100

Jan 05 2010, 07:34 PM

so thats what i do i cry for you but i cant let you see what your doing to me

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