Emo Scene Community

1000's of emo guys & girls!

Search soEmo

Top Emo Bands View All

8.4
8.4

Emo Lyrics View All

I don't care motherfucker, i don't care!! Motherfucker I Don't Care, by Murderdolls

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Emo Pictures - xxkillxmexslowlyxx
xxkillxmexslowlyxx
Posts: 22
Emonic Feb 03 2009, 07:34 AM
ok so yeah im a really big writer and i was oping this way some of my works might get noticed...heres one of my own called Emonic

i have many more of my works on this site: www.authornation.com/Morgan_L92


please send me comments and messages on what you think....im chasing a dream here. maybe i'll finally be able to catch it!!!


EMONIC:

My body is dead, is my soul alive

My mind is failing and soon I will die

Strength drained, hope dried up

Will taken into the evil that consumes

Passion, motivation lost in a darkness that devours

Luck and will are meaningless when anger engulfs

Emotionally overwhelmed, strength I don't posses

Connections severed, I have almost surrendered

Still, my cry is lost in the sky

It's nothing more then a broken plea

Great powers have fallen, now nothing can save me

Fiery humiliation embraces me, never letting go, numbing my vary pride

Soon I will die, I won't accept It

My opinion denied, I have no choice

Gluttonous and Inept, body and soul

Should have tried harder, should have seceded

A call for help, then a shudder, wasteful hate was all I could mutter

My love and hope is killed, deaths black lips will be my last

Memories fading, but I wont forget

I danced with death and now last impressions lost forever

Yet, a lost grudge will not be forgotten

Inner voice turns to stone, outer voice cries and moans

Flaming Imagination becomes a disgrace, burning soul burns away

Frozen body lay to waste, dark adventure soon discovered

A void to be filled, no lies in death

Soon I must embark on a journey of anger, disappear, contempt, and sorrow

I should have never waited for a better tomorrow

Now I 'm losing myself in a sea of pity, I'm falling and drowning in a ocean of cold

I've been broken down and shaken all around

With nothing else to say, I slowly fade away

My soul broke away to gaze upon my body, paralyzed, Emonically dark



(c) Morgan Lynn Dupler


Replies

Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18235
Feb 04 2009, 02:38 AM
I certainly like it. It flows well and is one of the most well written ones I have seen on here.
Emo Pictures - xxkillxmexslowlyxx
xxkillxmexslowlyxx
Posts: 22
Feb 04 2009, 09:57 AM
thanks,,,,the support is very much appreciated...i want to somehow get my name out there...its just on of those things where you want to be on top of the world and just yell' im here!!I NEED PUBLISHED!!JUST TAKE A CHANCE THEY'RE GOOD I PROMISE!!" bt ya know its not always that simple and things can be harder. This has been my dream and recently my heart has been shattered...because my brother stole one of My poems from my journal and submitted it in an oline poetry contest and it got COPYRIGHTED AND PUBLISHED under his name in a book....i couldn't believe it...why should he get the credit and everything? what gives him the right to take my dreams away from me?
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18235
Feb 06 2009, 10:19 AM
Argh that is annoying but you will always know you wrote it and it's great that it got published anyway.

Add Reply

  • Please note: Comments soEmo.co.uk considers to be totally unrelated spam will be removed.

Featured Users View More