talking with out making a sound
i broke through the looking glass
just to find sweet sorrow at last
seeing without looking at all
i saw you with your beauty and awe
walking with out moving one step
i wished we be together 'til death
but you saw through my lies
the broken truths i said aloud
never forgiving myself
for what i did to my sweet love
i follow my heart
straight to the eternal light
so what do you guys think? honest opinions!!! i think its not very good to be honest.