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pyro555
Posts: 67
a little summin summin i've been working on Feb 05 2009, 02:16 PM

talking with out making a sound

i broke through the looking glass

just to find sweet sorrow at last

seeing without looking at all

i saw you with your beauty and awe

walking with out moving one step

i wished we be together 'til death

but you saw through my lies

the broken truths i said aloud

never forgiving myself

for what i did to my sweet love

i follow my heart

straight to the eternal light

 

so what do you guys think? honest opinions!!! i think its not very good to be honest.

 

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Emo Pictures - xxkillxmexslowlyxx
xxkillxmexslowlyxx
Posts: 22
Feb 06 2009, 07:26 AM
ok well im a writer i currently have written over  80 original poems and have had a couple published in a book...but nobody on here except for Matt has commented on any or my work...so yeah.. your poem....it's very...itriguing. It tells the reader exactly what YOU want it to. It leavess it open for them to draw their own conclusions about it....and the freestyle is very nice too kudos to you!!!keep up the awesome work!!!!!!check out some of my poems i have published in this forum!!!!


~<3~
Morgan Lynn
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18346
Feb 06 2009, 10:32 AM
Hey Morgan give it time I'm sure others will comment. This site hasn't being going all that long especially the forums.

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