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fallen_angel2013
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emo kid Mar 16 2009, 03:15 PM

feast your eyes...

as the emo kid cries...

a single blue tear rolls down her cheek...

watch her fall as her knees grow weak...

not much to live for...

plenty to die for...

watch her hands shake with the gun aimed at her head...

watch the blood spill as it swallow the lead watch her breath her very last breath...

believeit or not  you just witnessed a

death...

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Deleted User

Mar 17 2009, 04:27 AM

very well written.
i like<3

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emokid2
Posts: 1

May 11 2009, 05:27 AM

This f*****ing amzing

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

May 11 2009, 08:35 AM

I love the poem so much, the contrast of life and death is good and its (stupid but is) easy to relate to the idea of seeing a friend die who feels worthless. Well done on this masterpiece! x

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