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i loved you, you made me, hate me, you gave me, hate see? it saved me and these tears are deadly. my black dahlia, by Hollywood Undead

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Emo Pictures - fallen_angel2013
fallen_angel2013
Posts: 3
emo kid Mar 16 2009, 03:15 PM

feast your eyes...

as the emo kid cries...

a single blue tear rolls down her cheek...

watch her fall as her knees grow weak...

not much to live for...

plenty to die for...

watch her hands shake with the gun aimed at her head...

watch the blood spill as it swallow the lead watch her breath her very last breath...

believeit or not  you just witnessed a

death...

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Deleted User
Mar 17 2009, 04:27 AM
very well written.
i like<3
Emo Pictures - emokid2
emokid2
Posts: 1
May 11 2009, 05:27 AM

This f*****ing amzing

Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
May 11 2009, 08:35 AM
I love the poem so much, the contrast of life and death is good and its (stupid but is) easy to relate to the idea of seeing a friend die who feels worthless. Well done on this masterpiece! x

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