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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

My perfect ending Mar 17 2009, 01:45 PM

My heart grows weak as the air fills with gloom,
My heart it suffers with my soul unknown,
You watch my tears steam down the cheek,
You watch my tears as I grow weak,

My throat grows dry,
My eyes grow tied,
The noose around my neck grows tighter,

The end is near,
The hand of death,
The hurt I fear,
This is me depressed,

I feel so wary,
I feel so down,
I feel as if I may drown,

I hang myself,
I slit my wrist,
I don't feel anything more than being pissed,

I feel no more,
I save no soul,
I go onto death and the darkness unknown.

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xxkillxmexslowlyxx
Posts: 22

Mar 20 2009, 09:42 AM

very nice...really like it!!!

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Mar 22 2009, 09:51 AM

aww thnx hun x

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Just_About_Done
Posts: 5

Mar 29 2009, 11:22 AM

I can't explain how much i liked it

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Mar 30 2009, 02:46 AM

aww thank you x

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Coldsoul
Posts: 47

May 05 2009, 12:50 PM

This is incredible!

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Total Forum Posts: 5

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