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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

An untold love Jun 26 2009, 08:04 AM

My wrists bleed with an untold love My heart as free as a caged dove The soul burns with an unwanted desire There's nothing left for me to aspire The words I speak are of solitude alone Every voice turning into a drone From now on I shall live and die alone Never shall love be truly shown The one I love lives miles from home Everyone else just seems a clone She's different and holds me postpone Together we'll be but for now alone I'm devoted to her untold I'll never stop loving her but behold The beauty shines from her hold Her eternal gaze is to be behold She's nothing less than I have foretold

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18350

Jun 26 2009, 04:25 PM

Brilliant. I read it whilst listening to some great music as well :)

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Pagan
Posts: 605

Jul 01 2009, 01:24 PM

you have me in tears literally its beautiful i love it

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Vybz
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Jul 01 2009, 06:42 PM

some of your best work yet Chris, love it

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Aug 04 2009, 09:04 AM

thanks

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 04 2009, 11:26 AM

Wow this more than amazing :) Brought a tear to my eye honestly. We should write a song together one day,with your poetry and my songwriting skills it would turn out awesome :d If you dont mind me asking, poem about anyone in particular? Cuz if it is i think they should hear it :) xx

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Aug 04 2009, 01:18 PM

yeah it was hun, I'd prefer to keep shut though for now xoxo

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 04 2009, 01:54 PM

Whatever you feel comfortable with mann :) xxxxxxxx

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