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PoetryEmo15
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You Cared Oct 11 2009, 04:27 PM

Noone cared when i fell off my bike. Nor did they care when i bled. The tears werent there to them. i wasnt heard, nor listened to. Just background noise, an annoying buzz. Nothing more, maybe less. They didnt care when i started high school. they didnt care how i felt when we moved. they wonder why i act like i do. when you see someone almolst killed, it changes you. My feelings were a bug, just something to be squashed. I was angry, sad, depressed. They didnt notice, not one bit. i had plenty of reasons to be troubled. but i kept up. with an enthusiasm new to the world. but i was slipping. loosing it. day by day, week by week. i met you. though you didnt know it at first, you kept me grounded. sane. i told you about it. you were suprised, to say the least. but you did the one thing noone else bothered to do. YOU CARED.

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Oct 11 2009, 04:39 PM

nice work *thumbs up*.

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sullen_gnome
Posts: 182

Oct 11 2009, 07:17 PM

weee..cool!! nice work!

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Pagan
Posts: 605

Oct 13 2009, 03:41 AM

awesome im nearly cryin

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just_emo_me_
Posts: 100

Oct 13 2009, 11:05 AM

that was awesome! :)

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