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fallling through a deep dark hole, failing to find the edges, as you rip me apart, I still feel whole..... Falling, by Natalie

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Emo Pictures - HardLifeDiary
HardLifeDiary
Posts: 62
The Hope Is All That Keeps Me Alive Apr 19 2010, 01:08 AM
My life has been tough, Don't know what to do, My days just feel rough, And if it wasn't for you, I would take my life, I really would do, Your all I have left and you keeps me alive, Into my dreams I wish I could dive, My dreams about you always being mine, Then I'd be with you and everything would be fine. I love to think about when we first met, But after a while we only regret, Everything fell wrong, I did a mistake, I want to make you a song to prove I'm not fake, But thanks to you I still have some hope, I won't suicide, I'll wash my tears with soap. But still I wish so hard that you once would be here, To help me not cry and to help me stop fear, I want to kiss your lips and never let go, I want to love you not being your foe, The best part of life is the only part that is great, And that's my only hope why I think your my mate. But I want some more, and that's real love, you see, Not "Mom, I love you, please never leave me.", I talk about when you kiss for a minute, When you say "I love you" and "Do you mean it?". But will that ever happen?, I'm never so sure, But hope keeps me alive, and that is my cure, And that is enough to make me feel good, So please leave a clue so I'd be sure that I could, Maybe be yours a day when its time, Let me get stuck in your music like the rhyme.

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Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Apr 19 2010, 04:20 PM
thats really good i like it its very creative nice job!
Emo Pictures - HardLifeDiary
HardLifeDiary
Posts: 62
Apr 24 2010, 04:55 AM
Thanks. Glad you liked it. :) Tell your friends to read my poetries, please? :3
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Apr 24 2010, 05:02 AM
well done! well structured and a cute message! * thumbs up*
Emo Pictures - HardLifeDiary
HardLifeDiary
Posts: 62
Apr 24 2010, 05:29 AM
Thank you so much. :) Glad you liked my poem. :3 When you have time you maybe could check out my other poetries?

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