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Emo Pictures - HardLifeDiary
HardLifeDiary
Posts: 62
Middle Of The Night Apr 21 2010, 12:55 AM
Here's a poem that just came from my head last halloween, but I improved it this time. ~ I'm walking on the subway in the middle of the night, I can see something black and dark, And something really white, It's coming from the well, And I think it has two claws, I think I walked on a shell, And the thingy start to "RAAWR"'s, What could that be, What does it want, I cannot see, And me it can't, I think it's a humanlike, 'Cuz it has a face and drags a bike. But it looks weird, it has a fang, It makes a sound just like he sang, And then I think it's one fang more, And I'm running to my door, But it takes me, My neck it bit, It's eyes I see, His body they fit, He's pale and white, His eyes are red, His fangs they might, Just be as it looks, so very dead. And suddenly I fell for the ground, And then I hear it sing the sound, I woke up and it is still night, But the thing is gone and I feel alright, I think a thirst just came into my FANG!? It thirsts for blood and then I sang. And now when I've told you a story of me, I gotta bite you and suck your blood, you see. ('Cause I still haven't got my first taaaste--) Please tell me what you thinked of it, And please don't make me regret that I asked you for this. (Which means I'm not seeking rude comments, please? D:)

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Emo Pictures - just_emo_me_
just_emo_me_
Posts: 100
Apr 21 2010, 10:07 AM
that was good i really got into it
Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Apr 23 2010, 01:05 PM
thats really good! i like vampires too! lollz anyways it really good i hope you write more!
Emo Pictures - HardLifeDiary
HardLifeDiary
Posts: 62
Apr 24 2010, 04:24 AM
haha thanks :D sure im writing some, read my other poetries. n.n' glad you liked it. :3

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