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hypercutter
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broken faith on a string Oct 28 2010, 08:03 AM

to feel the presence of God and be happy, it seems like it was all just a dream, but now the darkness has made him snappy, so here he is to make you hear an angel scream, he was once a satanist before a christian, and now he belongs to no one, for his faith is broken on a string, and here he doesnt believe, that even god can hear his broken faith on a string

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TehFruitLoopMonster
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Nov 10 2010, 06:01 PM

it was pretty cody, im not christian so i don't know all this 'god' stuff, but i liked it :D

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Nov 14 2010, 06:33 AM

Yea I liked it as well.

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hypercutter
Posts: 6

Jan 09 2011, 12:51 PM

the waves, they came rushing by today, breaking every piece of dirt into a simple form of mud. there is a safe haven i know of but its too far away. no matter how much i run it seems to be further every day. i hear a voice say go the distance but when will people hear of the sound of the resistance. the resistance of love is a sound that was once greater than anything but now no one believes. and here is a love im willing to show. if you are willing to go

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Vybz
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Jan 09 2011, 03:55 PM

1st one is interesting the one above is nice :)

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