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Thomis
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miss you Jan 17 2011, 03:08 PM

you were familiar in that strange town maybe if i'd stayed wed've worked it out now that we are separate i wait for my heart to forget you but all the alcohol and sluts in the world wont fill the hole you left me this ocean of separation shan't be dwarfed by anything i've felt before i doubt that your mind finds me anymore but every night i lie awake heart screaming out your name i remember the way you feel you move you gasp for breath you muffled midnight screams still haunt me once i tasted life with you by my side and me on your mind my life since then has just felt so fake knowing ill never hold you to me is worse than boiling in oil i cant recall existing so empty before. so empty.

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Jan 17 2011, 05:04 PM

I'm feeling you man... it was a nice poem and one i'm sure a good set of people can relate to...

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xXkuraiyoruXx
Posts: 164

Jan 17 2011, 07:27 PM

Agreed^^^

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Lunar_Elipse
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Jan 17 2011, 09:20 PM

wow

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TheBleedingDream
Posts: 101

Jan 18 2011, 09:25 AM

such eleganc such grace i think youve left a tear on my face

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jan 18 2011, 01:48 PM

Well I can certainly relate to this!

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Thomis
Posts: 453

Feb 01 2011, 09:38 PM

thanks guys, i have a new one now too, bout the sme girl 18months later plz read

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