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Why do we make it so hard? Why live our lives in distance? Why do we make it so hard? My Better Half, by One Last Wish

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Monster
Posts: 55
I'm Pathetic, You're Disgusting May 12 2011, 07:58 AM
Pathetic. You can’t even kill yourself. Pathetic. That’s what you are. You haven’t got the strength To go all the way. No will to guide your hand. Pathetic. You don’t deserve to die. You don’t deserve To be freed from this world. You. Are. PATHETIC. My hand stays by my side Because I have something I have to try and keep away From the taint of this human Diseased world. I can’t let it be touched by their Grubby hands, Nor leered at by their Gluttonous eyes. It’s disgusting. I’m physically sick every time I imagine them, look at them And think of their ways. They’re disgusting. I’m not going to kill myself Until everyone one of those Damned beings is finished. I’m not going to escape When there’s so much to be done. If Nature won’t quicken her pace To destroy these disgusting beings, Then I will add my might.

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EyesXxLikeXxDimonds
Posts: 100
May 18 2011, 04:17 PM
Really really good. It moved away from standard poetry form to capture the power of the piece
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7253
May 26 2011, 12:11 PM
dark and interesting :) x
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
May 26 2011, 12:52 PM
Is agreeing with EyesXxLikeXxDiamonds :)

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