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you make me complete, you make me completely miserable. Miserable, by Lit

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Mikii
Posts: 29
End Of The World Jun 01 2011, 04:50 PM
When the sun squeezes out it's last bit of light, When the skyscrapers fall and crash with ferocious might, Will you be my shining light ? When the oceans open to show the gates of hell, I hope you'll be the one ringing St. Peters bell, When the wind dies and the mountains sink, Me and you will be standing safe at the brink, When the thunder roars and lightening flashes, When the storm and rain volleys and lashes, Will you be there for me ? Guess we'll have to wait and see, I really wish you were with me now, To help me to understand and mourn my beloved deceased, But my beautiful dark angel, I hope you Rest in Peace..

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
Jun 02 2011, 04:40 PM
Really enjoyed this :]
Mikii
Posts: 29
Jun 02 2011, 09:06 PM
Thanks :D
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jun 03 2011, 06:22 PM
I love the imagery in this one! it's powerful and it amplifies the message of the poem. Excellent work!
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Jun 05 2011, 01:46 PM
Absolutely beautiful, and not to repeat what's been said or anything, but awesome imagery!!
Mikii
Posts: 29
Jun 05 2011, 05:06 PM
Thanks guys ! :)
Emo Pictures - EmoRazorBlade
EmoRazorBlade
Posts: 68
Jun 12 2011, 12:36 PM
Its really, really good. The imagination and truth you've poured from your heart to the paper is amazing. Hope to see more of your work soon! XXEmORaZoRbLaDexX
Mikii
Posts: 29
Jun 13 2011, 04:17 PM
Means a lot, thank you :) I'll try to put up some more :)

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