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Emo Pictures - Princess-OF-Pain
Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
See how I feel Jun 17 2011, 02:33 PM
Look deep into my eyes. What do you see? Do you see truth or lies? Do you see the real me? What you see i dispise. This is the person i no longer want to be. Look deep into my heart? What do you see inside? Do you see its torn apart? Do you see the darkest side? What you see is just the start. Theres a whole other section that i hide. You danced into my my life. You made me laugh and smile. You joked of me being your wife. You created a whole new happy file. Leaving you cut like a rusty knife. Now to be with you i'll have to wait a hell of a while. Love, joy, laughs, is what you brought. You were perfect in every way. You were the soul i sought. I then had something stupid to say. I guess i just never really thought. But i've loved you forever and i still do to this very day xx <3

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Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7255
Jun 17 2011, 02:36 PM
great poem ^___^ i loved the feeling of love in this :3 x
Emo Pictures - Princess-OF-Pain
Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Jun 17 2011, 02:38 PM
i wrote it just after breaking up with my ex and then i sent it to him. i dumped him cos i was depressed and was scared i was going to hurt him and this was the only way to explain how i felt to him x
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7255
Jun 17 2011, 02:40 PM
^oh ok..well *hugs* u r a good writer :] x
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18363
Jun 17 2011, 02:41 PM
What did he say about the poem?
Emo Pictures - Princess-OF-Pain
Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Jun 17 2011, 02:44 PM
he said "aww thats cute" n he saved it x
Emo Pictures - Princess-OF-Pain
Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Jun 17 2011, 02:45 PM
thanks karin *hugs*
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7255
Jun 17 2011, 02:48 PM
u should write more poems and post on here :] ! x
Emo Pictures - Princess-OF-Pain
Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Jun 17 2011, 02:52 PM
okay i will i got a few xx
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18363
Jun 17 2011, 05:44 PM
Do one about me :) Well if you cba sometime..
Emo Pictures - Princess-OF-Pain
Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Jun 18 2011, 09:03 AM
haha ok matt when i get the inspiration i will write a poem specially for you xx
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18363
Jun 18 2011, 12:28 PM
I'd love you then xD
Emo Pictures - Princess-OF-Pain
Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Jun 18 2011, 12:45 PM
oh well in that case i betta hurry n get writing then ;) xx
Emo Pictures - emorockgirl
emorockgirl
Posts: 11
Jun 23 2011, 03:18 AM
it's really a great poem,you are good
Deleted User
Jun 24 2011, 02:08 PM
You are an amazing writer. made me think of my ex as well. i miss him so much.. D:

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